3 days of class presentations and we're still not done! Everyone is doing such a nice job with their twitterives and I'm really impressed! Today we had five presentations and they all went really well.
First up was Sam C. her twitterive was about her family and her family room. I definitely think she has a great idea and lots of info for her twitterive, but she's just a little lost. Some people in our class suggested that she uses more organization in her twitterive and instead of writing the messages out, she could re-create the facebook messages between her brother and her. I also think that she should include more about her mom and other siblings. As a suggestion, I said to possibly sit down and jot some feelings down about each person or situation within her twitterive and she could create a wordle or a found poem out of those feelings.
Next was Alexa. her twitterive was about her search for finding the perfect home. She starts her twitterive off with a journal entry from when she was little about how often she moved and how she felt about it. I think she should include more about journal entries throughout this whole twitterive and this could possibly be her repetend. It was also suggested that she reorganize the conversations with her mom and fiance about the different houses.
Sam O's twitterive was excellent. Our professor complimented her many times and I think our whole class was really impressed. Her twitterive was about her Grandpa's life and how unfortunate it was that she never got to meet him. Sam included so much about her grandpa's life and how great of a man he was. I loved that at the end she tied in her life with her grandpa's life by setting a picture of each of them with words that describe both of them.
Last was Michael. His place was a sort of distance or loss. He said that he thought he was crazy but I totally got what he was going for. The non fiction piece that he read to our class before presenting his twitterive was excellent. I loved the two videos that he created on Youtube. He has one where he was singing and he included his mess-ups because he wanted us to get the imperfections. I loved that. He also added a video of a collaboration of voicemails and radio-talk. It was great and really gave us the feeling of distance.
First up was Sam C. her twitterive was about her family and her family room. I definitely think she has a great idea and lots of info for her twitterive, but she's just a little lost. Some people in our class suggested that she uses more organization in her twitterive and instead of writing the messages out, she could re-create the facebook messages between her brother and her. I also think that she should include more about her mom and other siblings. As a suggestion, I said to possibly sit down and jot some feelings down about each person or situation within her twitterive and she could create a wordle or a found poem out of those feelings.
Next was Alexa. her twitterive was about her search for finding the perfect home. She starts her twitterive off with a journal entry from when she was little about how often she moved and how she felt about it. I think she should include more about journal entries throughout this whole twitterive and this could possibly be her repetend. It was also suggested that she reorganize the conversations with her mom and fiance about the different houses.
Sam O's twitterive was excellent. Our professor complimented her many times and I think our whole class was really impressed. Her twitterive was about her Grandpa's life and how unfortunate it was that she never got to meet him. Sam included so much about her grandpa's life and how great of a man he was. I loved that at the end she tied in her life with her grandpa's life by setting a picture of each of them with words that describe both of them.
Last was Michael. His place was a sort of distance or loss. He said that he thought he was crazy but I totally got what he was going for. The non fiction piece that he read to our class before presenting his twitterive was excellent. I loved the two videos that he created on Youtube. He has one where he was singing and he included his mess-ups because he wanted us to get the imperfections. I loved that. He also added a video of a collaboration of voicemails and radio-talk. It was great and really gave us the feeling of distance.
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